quarta-feira, 23 de abril de 2008

Chuva



Deixou no chão a última peça e delicadamente caminhou nas pontas dos pés. E como um dedilhar cada passo era um toque singelo. Quiçá o chão sentisse, sentiria tamanha leveza que lhe seria carinho.


Um frio com raízes internas e um frio que lhe subia do chão, pelos delicados pés.

Já era tarde, e seu sentimento de solidão transpunha a pele, transpunha os limites da alma, alcançava o corpo. Seu corpo respondia a solidão, estremecia de frio. Tanto que, de repente, o frio era real. Na mesma medida da solidão.


A luz amarela fraca no banheiro trazia doces lembranças. Dos dias naquela velha casa, com aqueles seus velhos: velhos amigos, velhos hábitos, velho quarto, velho refúgio, velho ser...
Estava em silêncio. E queria sentir. Pensar era excedente para este momento tão transcendental de se aquecer, de tocar. Um sorriso surge sim ao se deparar com essas doces lembranças. Mas ansiava rodar a torneira e sentir a água quente relaxando e tocando seu corpo. Precisava do toque, e a força, a harmonia com que ela desceria nos muitos pontinhos acima de sua cabeça, proporcionariam quietude. Os pés, então, se interrompem na sua jornada. E assumem o natural de si, a sabedoria de escolher o caminho, a sabedoria de andar... voltam. Apagam a luz. Agora ninguém atrapalharia seu momento. Nem as mais doces histórias interromperiam o toque que a água lhe seria. Nem um só som mudaria o silêncio e a paz desta chuva.

Abre e sente. Molha seus cabelos e umedece o corpo até amolecer a alma. Fecha os olhos. Não existe mais mundo. Só os seus sentidos e a chuva. Sente o derreter da solidão, o desaguar de si. O carinho. A chuva e o amor.

E agora percebe como é incrível ser um conjunto de tudo isso. Um conjunto de secura e umidade, um conjunto de alma que esfria o corpo. Um conjunto de corpo que esquenta a alma. Um misturar de si com a chuva.


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22 comentários:

Lucas disse...

belissimo amiga!!!
A princípio, senti tristeza ao ver os velhos serem saudades...
mas depois senti alivio, ou perceber que a solitude pode ser um momento de aquecer a alma... mesmo que seja pelas gotas da chuva de um chuveiro. rs

bjus amiga
saudades

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"Abre e sente. Molha seus cabelos e umedece o corpo até amolecer a alma. Fecha os olhos. Não existe mais mundo. Só os seus sentidos e a chuva. Sente o derreter da solidão, o desaguar de si. O carinho. A chuva e o amor."

Babi, quanta riqueza e beleza nas palavras. E o interessante é que esse teu texto fala do que faço todos os dias: tomar banho no escuro, relaxar, amolecer a alma e, de quebra, ouvindo uma boa música. Não tem coisa melhor pra mim. E cada toque da água do chuveiro sobre minhas costas, meus ombros é a melhor das massagens. Saio do banho com o corpo revigorado, com a sensação de paz, de relaxamento... São mais de 3 da manhã, mas deu até vontade de repetir tal feitio. Hehehe! Bjos mil pra você! MELHOR DOS TEXTOOOOOOOOOOS SEUS QUE JÁ LI! HUAUAUAHUAHUAHUHUAHUA! =]

Filipe Garcia disse...

Bárbara,

tenho tanta coisa pra falar desse seu texto que me falta forma de expressão. Primeiramente, você abusou da discrisão. E esse abuso caiu muito bem ao texto e á alma do leitor. Tive a sensação do banho, do medo, da solidão, juntamente com a personagem. A cena foi se desenhando na minha mente e eu me permiti fechar os olhos de dentro pra poder ser o chão que pisa essa menina.

Depois, você me traz um turbilhão de sentimentos emaranhados, todos confusamente belos e interessantes. Sentimentos que se percebe a cada ato, a cada palavra escrita. Então confirmo minha tese de que você é segue a linha intimista, buscando o cerne do ser humano, falando desses sentimentos profundos e obsuros que habitam na gente.

Por fim, essa chuva que alcança alma. Não passava de um chuveiro, mas as sensações e a solidão eram tão grandes que tudo ganhou proporções gigantes, abraçando o estado frágil da personagem. Posso dizer que, de cá, me senti abraçado também.

Você conseguiu desbancar o poema da Marta e da Maria. Sim! Nunca li nada mais belo por aqui. Meus sinceros parabéns!

Beijo.

WILLIAM (Penso, Logo Escrevo...) disse...

Gostei do seu blog.
É bom encontrar textos que nos dão prazer de lê-los.
Parabens...

Jaya disse...

Posso falar?
Posso falar que foi dos que mais gostei por aqui?
Posso?
Rs.

É que eu queria saber sentir assim.
Queria poder dizer tão detalhadamente quando você todas essas belezas de coração, alma, pele, chuva.

Eu enxerguei poesia.
Enxerguei delicadeza.
E agora vou ler outra vez, porque me trouxe paz.

Beijo, Bárbara.

nj.marabuto disse...

desejo tanto esse "misturar de si com a chuva" que ando correndo para a varanda no primeiro trovejar, no mais efêmero desaguar de veraneio que se perdeu das águas de março, me trazendo um inverno precoce...
pior de tudo é que na chuva sempre ei de me frustrar, pois a minha vontade é de nela mergulhar.

beijo

Ana Cláudia Zumpano disse...

Bárbara estive longe daqui uns dias... mas já estou de volta e lendo aqui, perdi tanta coisa linda! Quanta sensibilidade neste texto... qnt delicadeza... um pouco de descrição de mim até... adorei! bjos ;*

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